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ESTABLISHING SHOT:

INT. GRACE and CARMEN'S FLAT-EVENING.

GRACE walks into the flat and sighs heavily whilst in the background CARMEN can be heard singing along with the television. Just as the song is coming to an end CARMEN walks into the hallways just as GRACE is walking into the lounge causing the two of them too collide.



ESTABLISHING SHOT:



INT. FLAT LOUNGE



CARMEN

Oh, hi Baby. (Kisses Grace) How was work?

GRACE

Yeah it was fine, nothing too exciting. How was your day?

CARMEN

Umm the same really, so what was the meeting about then?

GRACE

How do you know about my meeting?

CARMEN

Well I phoned to speak to you, you were in a meeting.

GRACE

Oh, I'm being promoted.

GRACE departs from the lounge and makes her way to the kitchen with CARMEN following closely behind.

INT. FLAT KITCHEN

CARMEN

Congratulations!Wine, Champagne whatever you want tonight baby! Well you sure kept that one quiet! You were applying for a promotion?

GRACE

In case I didn't get it. Lets not make a big deal over it please.

GRACE pours a glass of jack daniels before going back to the lounge with CARMEN right behind her.

INT. FLAT LOUNGE

GRACE is sitting in an armchair staring off into space.

CARMEN

But Baby this is something to make a big deal over. You work so hard and now it's finally paying off.

GRACE smiles at Carmen who seems oblivious to it as she paces back and forth praising GRACE about her work regime and etiquette.

CARMEN

It's about time your hard work paid off. You are always the first one at work yet somehow also the last to leave. Look at me rambling I should be cooking you a big slap-up dinner. No, I can go one better I'll take you to any restaurant you like.

GRACE

Carmen stop celebrating. It's more complicated than it seems (Grace bows her head)

CARMEN

What do you mean? More good news I hope?

GRACE

I can have the promotion but at the cost of conforming to being heterosexual.

CARMEN

WHAT?!

GRACE

I am supposedly tarnishing the companies name with my relationship with you. Ashley says it's an obscenity and that it's an infatuation with you not love and that to ascend in the company I'd have to abide by her rules.

CARMEN

What sort of woman is she? She can not possibly give you such an ultimatum. In this day and age you can not discriminate against someone because of their sexuality. It's the equivalent of saying I can't hire you because your black. You should report her.

GRACE

(sighs)

When you own the company you can do whatever you want.

CARMEN

No Grace! So what are you going to do about it? Conform to her heterosexual way of living/thinking? What if I had decided to live my life like that when I met you? My family didn't initially like the idea of me being with a woman but did that stop me? No, it didn't.

GRACE

Yes I know Carmen, but...

CARMEN

But what?

GRACE continues to sit with her head bowed down and has now folded her arms.

CARMEN

I don't know how you can be so calm about this. I knew I never liked Ashley. I remember the look she gave me the first time we met. It was cold and almost confused, as if she could not comprehend that I was your partner. But it's no different from a "normal" heterosexual couple, we do all the same things.

GRACE

Please calm down. You are getting yourself all worked up over nothing.

CARMEN

Over nothing? I feel like I don't know you. How is this nothing? Really Grace sometimes you astound me. What if I had thought that when my parents and siblings were going on at me about how it's not right for two girls to be together?

GRACE

Yes I know but it's not worth you getting so upset about it.

CARMEN shrugs her shoulders as she shakes her head and leaves the lounge heading for the kitchen, we then hear the sound of the tap in the kitchen before the sound of the kettle.

INT. FLAT KITCHEN

CARMEN takes a cup out of the cupboard, places a tea bag in the cup and two teaspoons of sugar, before turning around and leaning against the kitchen side.

The kettle boils, CARMEN opens the fridge and puts on the side before pouring the hot water into the cup. She replaces the kettle stirs the contents of her cup for a bit before adding milk and removing the saturated tea bag, she takes a sip before talking to herself again.


CARMEN finishes her cup of tea, washes up the cup and tea spoon puts them on the draining board before walking towards the lounge to talk her thoughts through with GRACE.

INT. FLAT LOUNGE

GRACE is still sitting on the sofa. GRACE then gets up, shakes her head and sits down again. She gets up again once more.

GRACE

I best do it now, it's now or never.

CARMEN

Grace... I've been thinking. As you probably heard me talking to myself in the kitchen.

GRACE goes to answer.

No it was a rhetorical statement, you don't need to answer whether you did or didn't. I know you have always worked hard to get into some sort of film studios/productions etc. So for you to not take this promotion because of me would mean you missing out on a great opportunity. (CARMEN's voice begins to wobble as she speaks indicating that she is attempting to hold her tears back.) And even though we intended to spend the rest of our lives together I know you will end up resenting me in the end. So I'll make it easy on you and leave.

CARMEN goes to leave the lounge. Just as GRACE grabs her arm and pulls her back.

GRACE

So that's your plan? Just give up at the first hurdle?

CARMEN

No but...

GRACE

So you see it as I love my job more than you? That I am just going to give up and conform to what someone else sees as being right or whatever she said? When I said leave it I didn't mean it in the way you interpreted it. I meant it in the I don't want to talk about it now as I'm disgusted that I was given such an appealing ultimatum.

CARMEN

Oh I'm sorry. (CARMEN is still holding back tears, her eyes are now glistening.)

Grace

This is not how I visualised today going at all, it was meant to be a normal day. I woke up in the best mood ever. Work was going well until the meeting about the promotion. Other than that there was hardly any arguments,stress or anything else for that matter. Then I come home and told you the news about my promotion in a

CARMEN appears to be getting agitated/irritable but her eyes are still glistening.

CARMEN

Well I can't argue with you there you should have let me know the ultimatum first rather than letting me ramble on.

GRACE

How do you manage to turn everything into an argument? I'm merely trying to tell you how I feel and you keep snapping and interrupting me! My only intention today was to make you my life partner, my wife.

CARMEN stares at GRACE who is now down on one knee holding her hand with her left hand and bearing a diamond engagement ring in her right hand.

So will you stop arguing with me for one minute and answer me this? Will you marry me?


END





Modifications


I had to re-think some of the dialogue as it was too formal.
So I changed some of the dialogue as it did not sound realistic, as in it's not the sort of speech people would use in everyday speech. That had to be rectified and changed to jargon.  










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